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| A scene at a concert |
- A n n e H a w t h o r n e

While everyone else seemed to enjoy and move their bodies to the deafeningly loud noise called ‘music’, I couldn’t help but wince at the horrible melody bellowing from the speakers.

The band playing tonight was some sort of metal rock band. They clearly did not understand music. Squinting my eyes to look at the band members on the stage, my eyes were almost blinded by the intense lighting. The lights screamed and shone primarily on the band members, making me wonder how they didn’t flinch away from it. When I actually got a glimpse at the members, I was repelled by their choice of clothing. Nearly all of them wore black or brown leather pants and it was ripped...

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