Both Friedman and Naylor’s essays have unity. They both flow nicely and every paragraph supports the main idea. They both use repetition to show unity as well.

In Friedman’s essay, each paragraph explains what a great teacher Ms. Hattie M. Steinberg was. Her journalism class was the only class he ever needed to take. His recollection of her teaching style and how it contributed to journalism is seen throughout the essay. Each paragraph reinforces the impact Ms. Steinberg had as a journalism teacher and how her teaching style created a strong foundation for Friedman. Friedman’s repetition of Ms. Steinberg’...

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